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Today is a busy day Today is sunday. It means I needn't to go to work today. 今天是星期天, 这意味着今天我不用去上班. Perhaps I was too exciting, I woke up ealy, Despite I got to bed so late last night. 也许我太兴奋了,我醒得很早, 尽管昨晚我睡得很晚. Half past six I got up,then I have recited four short essays as usual. 6点半我就起来了, 然后像平时背诵了四篇短文 Eight o'clock I went to the market bought a quarter of chicken and 8点,我去菜市场买了四分一只鸡, 一些空心菜,青椒,蒜苗和嫩姜 some water Spinachs and green peppers, garlic leafs and baby gingers. 一些空心菜,青椒,蒜苗和嫩姜 Then I returned to dormitory and cooking. 然后回到宿舍开炒 After I have my dinner, It was 10 o'clock. I have realized that Cooking is not a easy business. 吃完饭,就10点了.我感觉到做饭不是件容易的事. The dormitory was mess and dirty, I must to clean it up. 宿舍脏乱,我必须清洁一下. My sweat likes raining when I have finished. It's too hot. 清洁完宿舍,我汗如雨下, 太热了. Afternoon I Started to learn English again. 下午我又开始学习英语. I closed the book and write down four essays that I had recited in this morning. 我盖上书默写了早上背诵的四篇短文 Then referenced the book, I have checked it one time and found some mistakes. 对着书检查了一篇发现了些错误 I don't know that if this mothed is right. I just can do this before I find better mothed. 我不知道这种学习方法是否正, 在找到更好的方法前我只能这样 Sunday is a rest day, but not for me, I have lots of matter need to do. 星期天本是个休息日,但对我不是,我有许多去要做, Today is a busy day. I'm tired 今天是忙日,我累.

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Today is a busy day

 

Today is sunday. It means that I don't have needn't to go to work today.
今天是星期天, 这意味着今天我不用去上班.


Perhaps I was too excited and exciting, I woke up too early despite I got went to bed so late last night.
也许我太兴奋了,我醒得很早, 尽管昨晚我睡得很晚.

At half past six, I got up,then woke up and as usual I have recited four short essays as usual.
6点半我就起来了, 然后像平时背诵了四篇短文

At eight o'clock I went to the market to buy bought a quarter of chicken, and
8点,我去菜市场买了四分一只鸡, 一些空心菜,青椒,蒜苗和嫩姜

some water spinach, s and green peppers, garlic leafs scallions and baby gingers.
一些空心菜,青椒,蒜苗和嫩姜

Then Afterwards, I returned to the dormitory and started cooking.
然后回到宿舍开炒


After I have my dinner was done eating, It was already ten 10 o'clock. I have realized that cooking is not an easy chore business.
吃完饭,就10点了.我感觉到做饭不是件容易的事.

The dormitory was in a mess and dirty and so I must to clean it the place up.
宿舍脏乱,我必须清洁一下.

My sweat likes raining I was sweating so profusely [like the rain] when I was done have finished. It's too hot.
清洁完宿舍,我汗如雨下, 太热了.


In the afternoon I started to learn studying English again.
下午我又开始学习英语.

I closed the book and wrote down out the four essays from memory that I had recited in this morning.
我盖上书默写了早上背诵的四篇短文

Then referenced the book, When I have rechecked it one time and my work, I found some mistakes.
对着书检查了一篇发现了些错误

I don't know that if this method is the mothed is right way but until a better one comes along,. I just can do this before I find better mothed will continue to do so.
我不知道这种学习方法是否正, 在找到更好的方法前我只能这样


Sunday is a rest day of rest , but not for me. I have lots of matter need to do Simply too many things for me to do.
星期天本是个休息日,但对我不是,我有许多去要做,


Today is a busy day. I'm tired
今天是忙日,我累.

 

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