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A seperation with my wife A few days ago, my wife, she has left this city to other city, I hope she can stay here so much, now we are seperated because of her job, she is dispatched to filiale. She can earn more there, and there is good for her long-term development prospects or her career, so I let her go. I don't know if there will be something bad happen for our relationship. She is my first love, I have not loved a person like her before. these days, I live a alone lfie, a miserable life, I think i miss her every second, because we have spend a long time here together, here are so many things can reminds me of her. I think I have a great number of feeling to tell, but I just dont know how to express it

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A few days ago, my wife had already left for another city.  Ahh.... How much I wished that she could remain here.  Because of work, we are now parted/separated.  She had been reassigned to a branch.  This is because she can earn more there/because she is paid more over there and that her career path there is better.  Hence I had to let her go.  Now I am worrying would this situation affect our relationship. She is my first love.  Never have I loved anyone like her before.  These days,  I pass my life as a lonely man. One heart-broken life.  I felt that every hour, every minute, I am thinking about her.  This is because we had lived here together for a very long time.  Here, everything is her shadow and many things to let me think of her.


Thanks.  I think I have many many feelings to speak out I don't know how to express them.

 

 

A few days ago my wife headed to another city.  Ahh... How much I wish that she could remain behind.  We are now miles apart because of her job.  You see, she had been assigned to another branch where the pay is better and her career path brighter.  No choice but I have to let her go.  Now I began to worry about this situation.  Will it affect our relationship?  She is my first love and never have I loved anyone like her before.  These days, my life is lonely, one broken life.  Every hour and every minute passes by, I cannot help but to think of her.  We had been living here together for a long time and everything reminded me of her.

 

Thanks.  I have a thousand and one feelings ready to pour out but I don't know how to express them in English.

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A seperation with my wife

 

A few days ago, my wife, she has left this city to other city, I hope she can stay here so much, now we are seperated because of her job, she is dispatched to filiale. She can earn more there, and there is good for her long-term development prospects or her career, so I let her go. I don't know if there will be something bad happen for our relationship. She is my first love, I have not loved a person like her before.

those days, I live a alone life, a miserable life (:'C), I think i miss her every second, because we have spend a long time here together, here are so many things can reminds me of her.

I think I have a great number of feeling for to tell, but I just don't know how to express it.

 

* sad story bro *

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几天以前,我的妻子,她已经离开这个城市到另外一个城市去了,A few days ago, my wife had already left for another city.

我多么希望她能够留下来啊,Ahhh.... How much I wished that she could remain here.

由于工作原因现在我们已经被分开了,Because of work, we are now parted/separated.

她现在被调到分公司去了,She had been reassigned to a subsidiary.

因为她能够在那里赚到更多,This is because she can earn more there, [Or you can say, "... because she is paid more over there".  However, this is not a good way to learn languages by translation]

而且对她人生的职业发展也很有好处,and that her career path there is better.

所以我还是让她去了。Hence I had to let her go.

我现在担心会不会有异常情况来影响我们的关系,Now I am worrying would this situation affect our relationship.

她是我的初恋,She is my first love.

我也从来没有像爱她一样爱过别人。Never have I loved anyone like her before.
这些天,These days,

我过着一个孤独的生活,I pass my life as a lonely man.

一个悲惨的生活,One heart-broken life.

我感觉我每时每刻都在想她,I felt that every hour, every minute, [Literally, "every hour, every fifteen minutes" but we don't express like this in English] I am thinking about her.

因为我们在这里一起生活了很长的时间,This is because we had lived here together for a very long time.

这里都是她的影子,很多东西都会让我想起她。Here, everything is her shadow and many things to let me think of her.
谢谢!Thanks.
我想我有很多很多感受想要说出来,I think I have many many feelings to speak out

但是我却不知道要怎么表达 but I don't know how to express them.


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A seperation with my wife

A few days ago, my wife, she has left this city to other city, I hope she can stay here so much, now we are seperated because of her job, she is dispatched to filiale. She can earn more there, and there is good for her long-term development prospects or her career, so I let her go. I don't know if there will be something bad happen for our relationship. She is my first love, I have not loved a person like her before.

these days, I live a alone lfie, a miserable life, I think i miss her every second, because we have spend a long time here together, here are so many things can reminds me of her.

I think I have a great number of feeling to tell, but I just dont know how to express it

 

下面是中文:

几天以前,我的妻子,她已经离开这个城市到另外一个城市去了,我多么希望她能够留下来啊,由于工作原因现在我们已经被分开了,她现在被调到分公司去了,因为她能够在那里赚到更多,而且对她人生的职业发展也很有好处,所以我还是让她去了。我现在担心会不会有异常情况来影响我们的关系,她是我的初恋,我也从来没有像爱她一样爱过别人。

这些天,我过着一个孤独的生活,一个悲惨的生活,我感觉我每时每刻都在想她,因为我们在这里一起生活了很长的时间,这里都是她的影子,很多东西都会让我想起她。

谢谢!

我想我有很多很多感受想要说出来,但是我却不知道要怎么表达

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那快点想办法到她那边去。两个人分居,迟早很有可能出事情,即使能长期维持,关键是,两个人不在一起,维持有何意义?

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