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Once upon a time you... Once upon a time you loved me with all your heart and soul. Your love was stronger than your pride and my company more important than your social sites. Honesty was valuable and you did not feel offended by hearing the truth. Your love was not conditioned to stupid things and you understood I was not an extension of you. You were respectful about my time, future and life, and you wished I were the best in everything. Your eyes were shining when you saw me and your love was full of innocence, joy and caring. You saw me like feeling your last breath and not just like looking a body. I felt blessed because you were with me and prayed for having you to my side forever. I wished to be a better person because of you, to be good enough for you. I swallowed my pride and anger; I hide my sorrow and disappointment because you did not want to know about them. I repaired my heart of all the times you broke it. I tried to renew my heart to fulfill your expectations. Nothing made you accept that I´m not perfect but I loved you with my soul. Nothing was enough, nothing made you happy. Anger replaced smiles. Depression stole happiness place. Once upon a time, your love for me died and you killed mine.

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Once upon a time you...

 

Once upon a time you loved me with all your heart and soul.

Your love was stronger than your pride and my company, more important than your social sites. Honesty was of valueable and you did not feel no offence offended by on hearing the truth.

Your love was not conditioned to stupid things and you understood that I was not an extension of you.  You were respectful about of my time, my past and future. and life, and You wished I were me the best in everything.

Your eyes were shining bright the moment when your gaze fell upon saw me and your love was full of zest, innocence, joy and careing. When you saw see me, like feeling felt as if it was your last breath. and not just like looking You treated me like a goddess on a pedestal and not gloating at the body of one!a body.

I felt blessed because you were with me and prayed for having you to my side us to be forever in togetherness.  I wished to be a better person I became because of you. I want you to feel proud of me! to be good enough for you.

I swallowed my pride and anger; I hide my sorrow and disappointment because you did not want to know about them I don't want you to feel disillusioned just because of me. I repaired my heart of all the times when you broke it. I tried to mend and renew my heart to fulfill your expectations.

Nothing made you accept that I'm not perfect but I loved you with all my soul. Nothing was enough, nothing made you happy. Soon, anger replaced the smiles. Depression crept in and took the place of stole happiness place.

Once upon a time, your love for me,  now has died and you had also killed mine.

 

Powerful writing.

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