my favorite poet
the poet I like most is Haizi. when I first read his poem, I almost involved in it and can't get out of the cell of sadness. Some of his poems are inspiring, but I also feel sad. maybe just because for himself is a pessimistic person. He choze death at last,in the most unbelievable way. so we lost a genius. sometimes I wonder if he still alive, what will he bring to us. maybe it's not sad anymore.
his lifetime like a burning star, glorious but short.
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My Favorite Poet
The poet I like most is Haizi. When I first read his poetry, I was completely absorbed in reading it, and I was overtaken by the sadness in his writing. Some of his poems are inspiring, but I also feel that he wrote from a deep sense of melancholy. Perhaps the poet himself is a pessimistic person. He chose death at last, in the most unbelievable way. The world lost a genius. Sometimes I wonder, if he was still alive, what he could contribute to humanity. Perhaps Haizi did not die in vain: his life was like a dying star, that flashes brightly then is heard no more.
Good writing. Keep going.
写的很好。继续。
David
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thank you for your correcting !
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Hello. Sorry I am simply using the comment section to correct your piece ( the reason being that I am using my iPod to write ). I have to say my corrections are a bit arbitrary, based on my perception of what you wrote.
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Haizi is the poet I like the most ( or my favorite poet is Haizi). When I first read his poem, I was so involved ( or engrossed) in it that I could not get out of its clutch of sadness ( or that I could not get away from its cell of sadness)
Some of his poems are inspiring, yet sad, perhaps due to his pessimistic thinking/personality (or due to his pessimism). In the end, he chose death in the most unbelievable way. We have lost a genius. Sometimes, I wonder if he were still alive what he would bring to us (or to our lives or to the world). Maybe it's not sad anymore. His life was like a burning star, glorious yet short.
It's a nice tribute by the way. I will definitely check out his poems.
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