Anyone would like to correct my writing please? part III (final)
The next negative effect is loneliness. May be we often feel this feeling. We often confused how and to whom we can share about our feelings or problems. We do not know exactly who are our friends and foes. We may have a lot of friend but only few close or best friends. We can share some feeling or problem, but we still hide a lot of secrete feeling and problems. At last, loneliness is such a dark side of our nightmare.
Those are the positive and the negative aspects of staying in a bedsit. We have to realize that every single thing in this world have a good and bad, positive and negative, pro and cont sides. But we must do some effort to minimize the harm one.
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Anyone would like to correct my writing please? part III (final)
The next negative effect is loneliness. May be Maybe we often feel this feeling. We are often confused how and to whom we can share about our feelings or problems. We do not know exactly who are our friends and foes. We may have a lot of friends but only a few close or best friends. We can share some feelings or problems, but we still hide a lot of secrete feelings and problems. At last In the end, loneliness is such a dark side of our nightmare. experience
Those are the positive and the negative aspects of staying in a bedsit bed?. We have to realize that every single thing in this world have a good and bad, positive and negative, pro and cont sides pros and cons. But we must do some effort to minimize the harm one.
Pretty good, mostly just plural/singular issues and some minor style errors that you'll improve with practice.
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