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My Son and my Husband
Matteo is my son. He is 9 nine months old and he is born in the month of August. He is a beautifoul baby with brown hair and big brown eyes. He is was born after in the third years of my marriage to Giuseppe. I'm married from 3 years with Giuseppe [The way you wrote is illogical. Your child was born after two years of marriage but now you said you were married for three years! So what happened to the extra year?] and Sweet [You are writing a story and not a report, so use such adjectives to make your piece warmer and personal] Giuseppe and I are were together from 15 for fifteen years. When we got were engaged, I were 17 years old: was only seventeen. How young we were then two children. We are very happy together and we wish to make have the a biggest [You don't want to sound like some egg-laying factory!]family in the future [This is understood].
I wish you and your family all the happiness.
My son and my husband
Matteo is my son. He is 9 months old and he was born in August. He is a beatifoul baby with brown hair and big brown eyes. He was born after 2 years of marriage. Me and Giuseppe have been married for 3 years and we've been together for 15 years. When we got engaged, I was 17 years old; we were just two kids. We are very happy together and we wish to have a big family in the future.
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