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Could you correct me, please? Dear friend, I am write to you because I want to tell you my dicision to participate in a thriathlon competition, and I would like your opinion about this. A competition of thriathlon consist in three sports: we have to ride a bycicle,swim and run in a race that the distance depend on the level. I want to try the thriathlon because I love to do sports. In my life, I have done only marathons, races in mountain bike... and this is a little dream that I have always had. I know that it´s a very difficult competition, but my goal will be finish it! I have already started with my training. All the days, when I ´m going to my house before the job, my exercices starts! I run 1 hour all the days, and I go to swimmingpool every day, and I ride with the bicycle five times in the week. I have to change my diet, and I only eat healthy food. I look forward to your answer!

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Could you correct me, please?

Dear friend,

I am writing to you because I want to tell you my decision to participate in a triathlon, and I would like your opinion about this.

A competition of triathlon consists of three sports: cycling, swimming, and running. The distances depend on the overall difficulty of the triathlon.  (Really? I thought these distances were standardized.)

I want to try the triathlon because I love to do sports. So far, I have done marathons and mountain bike races and this is a little dream that I have always had.

I know that its a very difficult competition, but my goal will be finish it!

I have already started with my training.  I work out every day before work. (You can also say "I exercise every day before work," but this sounds strange.  (Se oye mal.))   Every day I run for an hour and go to the pool. I also ride my bicycle five days a week. <---- Do you mean that you train with your bike every weekday or that you ride your bike to work? (ir al trabajo) 

I have changed my diet, and I only eat healthy food.

I look forward to your answer!

 

 

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