Correct me, please!

Dear friend,

I´m going to go to New York  next week because I haven't got a  job in Spain, and it's very difficult to find.

I think this experience will be good for me because I learn  my English perfect , and last but not least, I have always wanted to live in other country to know other manners to live.

What do you think about my plan? Do you believe that I will have  a good oppurtunity there??

I hope your answer!

I hope that you can have a great opputunity in there.wish your good luck

Correct me, please!

Dear friend,

I´m going to go to New York  next week because I haven´t got a job in Spain, and it´s very difficult to find one. 

I think that this experience will be good for me because I will learn and perfect my English, and last but not least, I have always wanted to live in another country to know other manners to live. learn what it would be like to live there.

What do you think about my plan? Do you believe that I will have good luck?

I hope you answer!   ( I hope you have a fantastic time and wish you all the best!!)

Correct me, please!

Dear friend,

I´m going to go to New York the next week because I haven´t got a job in Spain, and it´s very difficult to find one.

I think that this experience will be good for me because I will learn to perfect my English and, last but not least, I have always wanted to live in other country to discover other ways of life.

What do you think about my plan? Do you believe that I will succeed/be successful (in my plan)?

I look forward to your answer!