Hi everybody ! :)

I am going to write a little about me myself. Well, my name is Lizeth Abata but some people call me just Liz also or "Hoshi" that which in Japanese means Star, the reason why I use this nickname is a bit long and but nice history, another thing is that I'm 22 years old and I am actually I studing the third year of my carreer at the university and I need so much to learn English due to I think It's very usefull, important, and necessary, also I want to learn this language and others is becuase I really love them.

About my hobbies this is one of them, learn languages, dance, sing, see watch scary movies, run like Forrest Gump jejej and others, one of my passions are danceing I would have liked to be a professional dancer, but my parents don't like this type of carrer they think that no it doesn´t have future. I think It's a bit about me. I hope not having boring I didn´t bore you with my things ejej Also If you have any recommedation please send them to do me, I accept links of web pages , books, any thing that you think can help me to improve my English.


Thank you so much! Have a nice day! :)

PD: I can help us you with the Spanish. ;)

Hola Liz, mi nombre es Uri Quintal. Soy un maestro de idiomas graduado de una universidad en los Estados Unidos y note muchos errores "basicos" en tu escritura, los mismos que marque en color azul y corregi en color rojo. Por el momento no conozco ningun otro lugar mejor para aprender idiomas por internet mas que italki.com, si gustas yo podria ayudarte a mejorar tu ingles hasta un muy buen nivel por un precio muy bajo y accesible. Puedes sentirte con toda la libertad de contactarme, me puedes encontrar en skype como Uriquintal. saludos! :)

Hi Everybody! ! :)

I am going to write a little about myself. Well, [Don't use these filler words in writing.  We used them in speech to buy us time when we don't know what to say in advance.  If we pause too long, it does not look good on us.] My name is Lizeth Abata but some people call me or just Liz to some others.  also I also have been called"Hoshi". that In Japanese this means "star". The reason why I use this nickname is that there is a bit of interesting long and nice history., [For good writing, you need to tell us this history.  Otherwise, just omit it.  You don't want to tease your readers.] other thing I am 22 twenty two years old of age and actually I studing the third year of my carrer a junior at the university. and I need so much to learn English due to I think It's as it is a very usefull, and important. and necessary, also I learn this language and other languages is becuase I really love them.

About my As for hobbies, this is one of them, learning languages is another one of them.  This doesn't mean that I am a bookworm.  I also like to dance, sing, see watch scary movies., run like Forrest Gum jejej and others, One of my passions are is dancing. I would have liked be a professional dancer, but my parents don't like this type of carrer approve of such a career as they think feel there is that no have future for it. I think It's a bit about me. I hope not having boring with my things ejej ??? [Dont understand what you are trying to say.] Also If you have any recommedation, please do let me know. [Don't ever say things like, "do me"  This means you wanted someone to have sex with you!]. , I accept liinks of page , books, any thing Anything that you think can help me to improve my English will be great! Thanks in advance. 


Thank you so much! Have a nice day! :) [Try not to use this too much.  It can sound like some sarcastic or insincere remark from some salesperson.]

PS: I can help us you with the Spanish. ;) I treat all entries as formal essays.  So don't use these smileys.  Use them in private emails etc.

Hi everybody ! :)

I going to write a little about me myself. Well, my name is Lizeth Abata but some people call me just Liz. I am also called "Hoshi", which in Japanese means Star, the story behind reason why I use this nickname is a bit long and but nice., other thing I'm 22 years old and I am actually I in the third year of my carrer degree at the a local university and I need so much to learn as much English as possible due to because I think it's very usefull, important, and necessary,. I am also learning this language ,and others, is becuase I really love them.

About my hobbies, learning languages this is one of them, learn languages, danc, singing, see watching scary movies, running like Forrest Gump jejej amongnd others. One of my passions are is dance and I would have liked be a professional dancer, but my parents thought that there was no future for me in it. don't like this type of career they think that no have future. I think It's That is a bit about me. I hope I not haveing not been boring you with my things ejej. Also If you have any recommendations please send them to me, I accept links of pages , books, and anything else that you think can will help me to improve my English.


Thank you so much! Have a nice day! :)

PSD: I can help us with the Spanish. ;)

Muy bueno Liz. Recuerda que separar tus ideas con puntos. Intentaré mandarte algunos links.