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May Day I back to my hometown today . I read the old letters by my girlfriends . But they are all leave away from me . Time let us be strange and i lose my friend even their contact way . I miss them ,because we were so closed before . I want my friends and my dreams back .

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May Day

I'm back in my hometown today. I read the old letters from my girlfriends. They all left and moved away from here. Time made us strangers. I lost my friends, even the way to contact them. I miss them, because we were so close. I want my friends and my dreams back .

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May Day

I back to my hometown today . I read the old letters by my girlfriends . But they are all leave away from me . Time let us be strange and i lose my friend even their contact way . I miss them ,because we were so closed before . I want my friends and my dreams back .

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今天我回到了我的家乡。我翻阅了从前闺蜜们给我的信。但他们都已经离我远去。时间让我们变得陌生,我失去了我的朋友,甚至是他们的联系方式。我很想念他们,因为我曾经是如此的亲近。我想找回我的朋友们和年轻时的梦想。

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that's a good idea .thank you .
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Can you write the same in Mandarin, please. Maybe it will give more precise corrections.

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