今日の天気
今日の天気はとっても美しいだった。 ぼく公園にいった。たくさんな人おった。家族といぬと鳥が全部公園にきた。みなさんは楽しい時間だったと思う。ぼくが歩いてたとおんがく聞いた。四十分ぐらいをした。その後、車で家に帰った。おもしろな日だった。
Today's weather was really pretty so I went to the park. There were so many people there. There were families, dogs and birds that came to the park as well. I think everyone seemed to have a good time. I walked and listened to music. I did this for about 40 minutes. After I was finished, I drove home. It was a really good day.
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今日の天気
今日の天気はとっても美しかった。 ぼくは公園にいった。たくさんの人がいた（/おった）。家族といぬと鳥がみな公園にきていた。みなさんは（/みんな、）楽しい時間を過ごしたと思う。ぼくは歩いて（/歩きながら）おんがくを聞いた。四十分ぐらいそれをした（/そうしていた）。その後、車で家に帰った。おもしろい日だった（/本当に良い一日だった）。
Today's weather was really pretty so I went to the park. There were so many people there. There were families, dogs and birds that came to the park as well. I think everyone seemed to have a good time. I walked and listened to music. I did this for about 40 minutes. After I was finished, I drove home. It was a really good day.
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