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please correct my presentation:) Thank you for visiting. I want you to correct my presentation about myself. Hello everyone.My name is Mik. I'm in a third-year in the International Relations at University of A. My hometown is B. As you know,it's really far from A. It takes about 2 and half hours by bullet train and airplain. Then, what's the reason did I come here. To be honest, there's no special reason. I just wanted to get out of my homwtown at the moment and I also wanted to live somewhere warm. I'm in a Asian culuture course and my second foreign language is Korean. Before I entered this university, I've alreade decided to take this course. Because I've been interested in Korean since I was in high school. One day I watched a Korean drama and it showed about manner at home in Korea. It was my first time to see Korean culture,before that I somehow don't like Korean. However I realized some words and cultures are very much like Japanese one. After that,I started to study Korean and Korean culture by myself. Every time I study Korean,I find new things and it makes me happy. I'd like to keep studying about the difference between our countries more. I'm interested in other countries as well. When we learn something about foreign country, we should talk to the person who comes from the country. I think English is common language in the world. That's why I need to study and improve my English in this class. Lastly, I really like eating food from all over the world. If you know any good restaurant to eat,plz let me know. I know great Spanish restaurant in my city. If you wanna know the place,feel free to ask me. Thank you for your attention.

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please correct my presentation:)

Thank you for visiting.
I want you to correct my presentation about myself.


Hello everyone. My name is Mik.
I'm in a third-year in the International Relations at University of A.
My hometown is B. As you know, it's really far from A.
It takes about 2 and half hours by bullet train and airplain AIRPLANE.
Then, what's the my reason did come for coming here ?
To be honest, there's no special reason.
I just wanted to get out of my homwtown hometown at the moment and I also wanted to live somewhere warm.
I'm in an Asian culture course and my second foreign language is Korean.
Before I entered this university, I've I'd already decided to take this course.
Because I've I'd been interested in Korean since I was in high school.
One day I watched a Korean drama and it showed about manners at home in Korea.
It was my first time to see Korean culture,before that I somehow don't didn't like Korean.
However I realized some words and cultures are very much like Japanese ones.
After that, I started to study Korean and Korean culture by myself.
Every time I study Korean, I find new things and it makes me happy.
I'd like to keep studying about the difference between our countries more.
I'm interested in other countries as well.
When we learn something about foreign country, we should talk to the person who comes from the country.
I think English is a common language in the world.
That's why I need to study and improve my English in this class.
Lastly, I really like eating food from all over the world.
If you know any good restaurant to eat, plz please let me know.
I know great Spanish restaurant in my city.
If you wanna know the place, feel free to ask me.
Thank you for your attention.

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Really fantastic job! You know 3 languages? That is so cool! You make me ashamed that I only know 2 :D

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