My homework for English
Dialog
Doctor: Good morning, Mrs ...! What brought you along today?
Patient: Hello, doctor, I have severe (сильная?) stomachache and general body ache. What does it mean?
D: Probably, you have appendicitis.
P: It's bad, very bad! I don't want to be operated.
D: But you need it.
P: Oh, doctor! I'm scared...
D: Don't worry. We will take care about you.
P: Thank you, doctor!
P.S. It's not serious)
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My homework for English
Dialog
Doctor: Good morning, Mrs ...! What brought you along today? More common: "brought you here today"
Patient: Hello, Doctor. I have a severe stomachache (commonly spelled as two words: stomach ache) and a general body ache. What does it mean?
D: Probably, you have appendicitis.
P: That's bad, very bad! I don't want to be operated on.
D: But you need it.
P: Oh, Doctor! I'm scared...
D: Don't worry. We will take good care of you.
P: Thank you, Doctor!
P.S. It's not intended to be serious. )
Usually, the word "doctor" is not capitalized. But I capitalized "Doctor" here because the patient is calling him that as if it were substitute for his name.
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D: Don't worry. We will take care of you.
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