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about today---help others.
Today my brother woke me up I was woken up by my brother (better to turn it into active voice, it avoids awkward verb conjugation, but what you wrote was not wrong) at 7:30, but I got up at 8. Sometimes I think I must have got sick, because I am feel too lazy.
At 11, my roomate's father gave me a call while I am as I was going to have my lunch.He told me that he would arrive at the railway station at 12. Then At this time I feel felt (past tense) anxious because
I was holding his ticket was in my hand.So,I did't eat and hurry hurried to the station. But when I got there he did't turn up. I standed stood at the gate and waited him for almost 1 hour. I hate waiting. I felt very hungry then at that time and I feel tired now at this time .I have many things to do tonight,I think I should take a rest now.
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about today---help others.
Today I wake up by my brother at 7:30,but I got up at 8. I sometimes feel sick ,I am too lazy.
At 11,my roomate's father called me while I was going to have my lunch.He told me that he would arrive at the railway station at 12.At that time I felt anxious because his ticket was in my hand.So,I didn't eat and I was hurry to the station,But when I got there he didn't arrive .I standed at the gate and waited for him for almost 1 hour.I hate waiting . I felt very hungry and tired at that time .I have many things to do tonight ,I think I should take a rest now.
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