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My hero - Dad My dad is my hero. Father is an important person who is everybody in the world should love, such as me :) My father, Janusz is 55 years old. He has blue eyes. He's quite tall, but a bit shorter than my husband. My dad is a fitter-walder and he works with a heavy constructions. I see him six times a year, because he was working in Ireland from ten years. He is very hard working. Beside that, when he is coming at home (in Poland), he doing also a houseworks. He says that is always something to do. He makes a dinners whem my mother is outside. However, he likes cooking and his meals are always very tasty. When i was young, he protected me and took care of me with love. He instructed me to be a good person. He is a good model for me since i was born.

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My hero - Dad

My dad is my hero. Father is an important person who everybody in the world should love, such as me :) My father, Janusz is 55 years old. He has blue eyes. He's quite tall, but a bit shorter than my husband. My dad is a fitter-walder and he works with heavy constructions. I see him six times a year, because he was been working in Ireland for ten years. He is very hard-working. Beside that, when he is comes home (to Poland), he also does housework. He says that there is always something to do. He makes dinner when my mother is outside. He likes cooking and his meals are always very tasty. When I was young, he protected me and took care of me with love. He instructed me to be a good person. He has been a good role model for me since I was born.

 

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