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My old life My parents are peasants,and they plant many vegetables in my hometown,They are busy manageing vegetable garden from spring to the winter.I often helped them to do some work when I was in holidays. I didn't feel tired,because I was young.I was often broken-hearted when I saw my parents who was busy working.I like the vegetables garden,and I can eat many kinds of vegetables.After all day work,I could sit at the table,drinking beer and eating vegetables which were planted by my parents and I.I was very glad at this life.I often think I and my lover lie on the grassground which is full of flowers and butterflies.In this case,I will forget all pain and enjoy the nature.I like the nature and I will pursue interest of the nature.

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My old life

 

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My parents are peasants farmers [or "My parents are from the peasantry".  The way you write implies degration to them].and They plant many vegetable growers in my hometown and they plant many kinds of vegetables in my hometown,They are always busy manageing vegetable managing their garden from spring to the winter.__I often helped them to do some work when I was in am back home for the holidays. I didn't don't feel tired,_because I was am young.__I was often broken-hearted when I saw see my parents who was busy in their back breaking working.__I like the vegetables garden,and I can be able to eat many kinds of vegetables.__After all day working in the garden,_I could can sit at the table,drinking beer and enjoying eating the vegetables - grown from the sweat of our brows which were planted by my parents and I.__I was very glad at enjoy this life of life.__I often think I and imagined/wondered my lover beloved and I lie on the grassground grassland filled which is full of flowers and butterflies flying about.__In this case,I will forget All my pains will be eased by this beauty of and enjoy the nature.I like the nature and I will pursue interest of the nature. [不明這句. 去學自然科學? 或追尋天然的趣味?]

 

I don't feel tired.  = 我不覺得累

I didn't feel tired. = 我不会覺得累

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My old life

 

My parents are peasants, and they plant many vegetables in my hometown. They are busy managing their vegetable garden from spring through to the winter. I often helped them to do some with their work when I was in during the holidays. I didn't feel tired (Or: It didn't tire me), because I was young. I was often broken-hearted when I saw (Or: It broke my heart to see) my parents who was were always busy working. I liked the vegetables garden, and I can eat ate many kinds a variety of vegetables due to it. After all day working all day, I could would sit at the table, drinking beer and eating vegetables which were had been planted by my parents and I. I was very glad at to live this life (Or: I'm very happy that I lived in this way). I often think that I and my lover and I will lie on the (or: this) grassground which is, full of flowers and butterflies. In this case, I will be able to forget all my pain and enjoy the nature around me. I like the nature and I will hope to pursue this interest of the nature.

 

I know there are a lot of corrections here, but I hope it helps! :)

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