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Shrinking Feelings What do you have in your pocket for me? Is that a letter? What else could it be? Tear it up in pieces and throw it away Who wants to know the reason you fail? Now go take a seat watching TV You might get excited, applaud as you see Cheap dreams that delude and make you forget Your hopes, without the smallest regret. They say love hurts and you proved it so well You loved me the most.

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Shrinking Feelings

What do you have in your pocket for me?
Is that a letter? What else could it be?
Tear it up in pieces and throw it away
Who wants to know the reason you fail?
Now go take a seat watching TV
You might get excited, applaud as you see
Cheap dreams that delude and make you forget
Your hopes, without the smallest regret.
They say love hurts and you proved it so well
You loved me the most.

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Nicely done! The English reads fine. I am not a poetry editor, but I offer a reader's reaction to the verse. I think the last line is too short. I want it to say something like "You loved me most -- Damn you!" But it is very nice. :^)



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