Search from various English teachers...
South Korea flagRumi
Please correct this:o~ It is inspired from B**'s song "T****". The face that full of hoping messages and bright Africa, The sun that is rising behind the country is expressing sorrow and hope of Africa. also, African traditional pattern and yellow color speaks where is this music from.

Corrections · 3

0

Please correct this:o~

It is inspired by B**'s song "T****".
The face that is full of hoping messages and bright Africa, the Sun that is rising behind the country is
expressing sorrow and hope of Africa (or the Sun that is rising behind the country and expressing..).
Also, African traditional patterns and yellow color speaks where is this music from.

 

-------------

By using "the" in "the country" you are saying about particular country, probably described in the song or somehow known to the reader/listener. If you are not sure that read/listener knows what country are you talking about, then it's better name it first and then use "the country" ;)

 

what's the song name? :)

I don't know any songs about Africa.. I used to listen "Deep Forest" in my teenage years, haha

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x05BUoXCXjM

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today