About loneliness

In nowadays, life is getting more and convenient, :we can ordering food at home, we can buy things from the internet, we can work at home, we can trade with foreigners by the internet.....
These convenient conditions give people a better life, while in the mean time more and more loneliness. People takea spend more and more time staying at home instead of going outside. People like to communicate with others by network instead of face to face. More and more people become individualist loners. They'd like to staying with their pet more rather than with other person people. They become lonely.
When they become lonely, they tried their best to change this situation. Some of them find a better way to change it-go to traveling, go outside with friends. While other person truns to girls(what does this mean?), they think, that make fun with girls can keep away from loneliness.
After all kinds of changes, people can be divided into three parts.types/ The first part of type of people find their interesting, true love even goal in life, the second part of 同上people get used to loneliness, they try their best to enjoy loneliness, while  (and 即可，这个连词请查字典用法） the third part of people just get more lonely.
I guess i belong to the second part of people, but i am trying to enter the first part. So which part do you think you are? belong to.

写得很有意思。作为现代人，我们都应该仔细反省一下所缺失的东西，其中最重要的应该就是现实的交际。