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my happy life I have a big family.I very happy every day.I can play games and do my homework with my friends.I always go to park.I think part is so beautiful. I also watch TV and have a talk with my parents. I know my mother want me become a good student. I will study hard. I'm so happiness.This is my happy life.

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My happy life:

 

I have a big family. I feel very happy every day. I can play games and do my homework with my friends. I always go to a park. I think they are so beautiful. I also watch TV and have a talk with my parents. I know my mother wants me to become a good student. I will study hard and make her happy. I'm so happy. This is my happy life! =)

 

I hope you continue to remain happy and cheerful, Amen.

Keep up your efforts.

 

Serenity. 

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Nice story, nice boy.

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