my happy life
I have a big family.I very happy every day.I can play games and do my homework with my friends.I always go to park.I think part is so beautiful. I also watch TV and have a talk with my parents. I know my mother want me become a good student. I will study hard. I'm so happiness.This is my happy life.
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My happy life:
I have a big family. I feel very happy every day. I can play games and do my homework with my friends. I always go to a park. I think they are so beautiful. I also watch TV and have a talk with my parents. I know my mother wants me to become a good student. I will study hard and make her happy. I'm so happy. This is my happy life! =)
I hope you continue to remain happy and cheerful, Amen.
Keep up your efforts.
Serenity.
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Nice story, nice boy.
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