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Halloween What are you going to be on Halloween this year? I've been thinking what I'm going to disguise. I've been thinking...I could be a Soccor Player. uh...World Cup Soccor, Japan's national team? I have a friend who has the uniform. What do you think? Boring? Odd? (I'd be very glad if you correct my Notebook)

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Halloween

What are you going to be on Halloween this year?
I've been thinking what I'm going to disguise.
I've been thinking...I could be a Soccor Player.
uh...World Cup Soccor, Japan's national team?

I have a friend who has the uniform.
What do you think? Boring? Odd?

(I'd be very glad if you correct my Notebook)

Hello Holiday.

Very good. As you mentioned, soccer is the correct spelling. It would be clearer to say " I've been thinking about disguising myself as a member of Japan's World Cup Soccer team." 
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oh...I mean, soccer.
Bad Spelling too.

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