Introducing myself
Hello everyone!
My English name is James, and I am living in Nanjing, an ancient city in the east of China. I'm a computer engineer. In working hours, I always sit before the computer, writing and programming.I love my job. It's very interesting. In my spare time, I often do some housework, such as making dinner or read historical novel, go outside for hiking, and etc.
Of course, I enjoy to study English.
Wherever you are, I want to make friend with you.
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Introducing myself
Hello everyone!
My English name is James, and I am living in Nanjing, an ancient city in the east of China. I'm a computer engineer. In During working hours, I always sit before the computer, writing and programming.__I love my job. It's very interesting. In my spare time, I often do some housework, such as making dinner or read historical novels, go outside for hiking, and etc.
Of course, I enjoy to studying English. Wherever you are, I want to make friends with you.
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Introducing myself
Hello everyone!
My English name is James, and I am living in Nanjing, an ancient city in the east of China. I'm a computer engineer. In working hours, I always sit before the computer, writing and programming.I love my job. It's very interesting. In my spare time, I often do some housework, such as making dinner or read historical novel, go outside for hiking, and etc.
Of course, I enjoy to study English.
Wherever you are, I want to make friend with you.
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Introducing myself
Hello everyone!
My English name is James, and I am living in Nanjing, an ancient city in the east of China. I'm a computer engineer. During working hours, I always sit before the (a)|(my) computer, writing and programming. I love my job. It's very interesting. In my spare time, I often do some housework such as making dinner or reading historical novel. I also go outside for hiking, and etc.
Of course, I enjoy to study studying English.
Wherever you are, I want to make friends with you.
Your construction "I am living in Nanjing" gives me the impression that you were born somewhere else but have moved to Nanjing where you currently live.
(a) | (my) are alternative words that you could use here.
I always sit before a computer
I always sit before my computer.
My computer would more commonly been seen.
I have split this sentence I often do some housework, such as making dinner or read historical novel, go outside for hiking, and etc into 2 sentences because they are different types of activities.
What sort of historical novels are you interested in reading ?
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