Working at the company versus working at home

Although most people work in the office, some people work from home. Telecommuting(Telecommunications) is sometimes more useful for people in several things(for several reasons). First, people are able to save their time to work at home. If their workplace is far from their home, they spend their time commuting by cars or subways(car or subway). Second, people can use their time flexible(Second people can be more flexible with their time). If they have done their work, they are able to use their time to do what they should do today. However, In spite of these advantages, I prefer working at the company. There are two reasons why I think so. First, when people work at the office, they are able to concentrate on their work. For example, if I work at home, although I try to focus on working , it is easy for me to find out house chores in the house. While I am working , I will worry about house chores.
Second, people are able to distinguish between house chores and office works. If they don't distinguish between house chores and office works in the house, until they made it their work, they are willing to do their works.(If they don't distinguish between house chores and office work in the house until they both becomre their work.) In spite of their house chores or taking care of their babies, they try to do their work.
However, If people should finish their work at the office, they will try to do their best to end up.(However, if people finish their work at the office they will do their best to do a complete job.)  After work, they are able to take a rest and take care of their babies
Therefore I like to work at the company.

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