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My english homework There is a general discussion over the Internet in recent years. Internet ,an advanced technology,helps a lot in many ways like going shopping online,accepting the newest information instantly and or so.The Internet is of vital important,which has made great contributions to our life. Now people in growing numbers are begining to believe that surfing the net contribute directly to our knowledge accumulation by giving us some fresh ideas and broadening our horizons.However ,the other side of opinions about the Internet are quite opposite.They hold the view that teenagers are always surfing the net for one cause or another,but they have never put their heart on study.Furthermore,teenagers with the strong wish and the computer skills try to break into computers ,stealing classified data. So how to use the Internet in correct ways? Here are some ideas.First,teenagers should control themselves and keep the temptation of the net from them,Second,parents need to pay more attention to their children and give them some space so that they can relief themselves from busy life by playing a few interesting games on the net,Third,keep in mind that do not be addicted to playing games for hours.That will only make you feel more tired.If you do as what i say,using the net will be more benifical to you. All i want to say is the Internet will bring us a lot of benifits if we use it in correct ways

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However , on the other side, of opinions about the view of the Internet are is quite the opposite.
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There is a general discussion over the Internet in recent years.
The internet ,an advanced technology,helps a lot of people in many ways like going shopping online,accepting receiving the newest information instantly and or so on and on.The Internet is of vital importance,which has made great contributions to our lives.
Now people in  A growing numbers are begining to believe that surfing the net contributes directly to our overall knowledge accumulation by giving us some fresh ideas and broadening our horizons.However ,the on other side, of opinions about the view of the Internet are is quite the opposite.They hold the view that teenagers are always surfing the net for one cause reason or another,but and because of that they have never put their heart on into studying.  Furthermore,ambitious teenagers with the strong wish and the computer skills try to break into computers and stealing classified data.
So how to do you use the Internet in correctly ways? Here are some ideas.First,teenagers should control themselves and keep the resist the temptation of the net from them.  Second, parents need to pay more attention to their children and but also give them some space so that they can relief themselves relax from a busy life schedule by playing a few interesting games on the net.  Third,keep in mind that you do not become addicted to playing games by playing them for hours.That will only make you feel more tired.  If you do as what i say, using the net will be more benifical bigger benefit to you.
All i want to say is the Internet will bring us a lot of benifits if we use it in correct ways  correctly.

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