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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am learning English because for I am a junior high school student. It is a mandatory compulsory course, but I wish to learn it in order to make have a friends from foreign countries. My English is kind of poor in comparison when it compares to students in America, or US whose native language is use English as mother tongue. Although at my school, I could be a top student(?). "Could be a stop student" or "I am a top student"? Using "could" implies that it is possible for you to be a top student in the future. But in order to say this, you need to give more context. OK I like reading books and listening to music. If you want to make friends with me you are welcome to send me a message. ,welcome, I am a 18-year-old Chinese girl aging 18.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I am learning English ,for I am a junior school student,it is a compulsory course ,I wish to have a friend from foreign countries ,my English is kind of poor when it compares to students in America or US which use English as mother tongue,though at my school,I could be a top student.OK I like reading books and listening to music,If you want to make friends with me ,welcome, I am a chinese girl aging 18.
I am a junior school student, and I'm learning English because it's a compulsory course.
I want to have a friend from a foreign country (or, I want to have friends from foreign countries).
My English is kind of poor compared to American students who speak English as their mother tongue. Although at my school, I could be considered a top student.
I like reading books and listening to music.
If you want to make friends with me, you're welcome to. I'm an 18 year old Chinese girl.
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