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Introduction of interesting places to my friends
* Emam is the holy person in Islam religious!(the leader of Muslims)
Attractive and tourist places of religion in a glance
有吸引力的地方的宗教和旅游场所一目了然
有趣的宗教和旅游胜地一览
Religion has a long history in Iran
宗教在伊朗有着悠久的历史
that is one of the main factors for Building places , central and Religious tourist places from different religions in the past time
这是一个主要因素为建筑地方,中心和宗教旅游场所来自不同宗教在过去的时间
这是伊朗在过去能够成为多种宗教的中心,有很多古建筑的主要原因之一。
——伊玛目礼萨的神圣的地方(在马什哈德城市)
Mashhad is the testimony of the eighth Shia Imam.
马什哈德!是伊玛目礼萨的证词地点,他是第八什叶派宗教领袖!
马什哈德是是第八代什叶派伊玛目(宗教领袖)Reza宣誓的地点。
He is the only Imam that have been buried outside of Arabic countries.
他是唯一的伊玛目已经埋以外的阿拉伯国家
Reza是唯一一个被埋在阿拉伯国家之外的伊玛目。
___sacred place"holy masumeh" she called "innocent" "masumeh"
神圣的地方“无辜”她叫“无辜”,"masumeh"
这句话不知该如何修改
不过查了一下资料,印度有个“Hazrat-e Masumeh”陵墓,是为了纪念 Imam Reza的姐姐 Fatemeh而建立的。不知道你指的是不是这个地方。
__"shahcheragh",which means king of light) and it is a religious place,it is in shiraz city!
shahcheragh(这意思是君为轻)它是一个宗教场所在设拉子市!
它是一个在设拉子市的宗教场所。
he is one of the Imam's children!
他是阿訇的孩子。
Shiraz是伊玛目阿訇的孩子之一。
he is the emam reza's brother.(The older brother of Imam Reza)
Shiraz是伊玛目礼萨的哥哥。
建议:
1.段落之间分隔最好再明确一些
You'd better put the distinction of the paragraphs clearly
2.把一句话放在一起翻译,否则会不连贯
You'd better translate the whole sentence,not several phrases.
However, this is a good article about Iran. Thank u very much!
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