My dad answered:[Understood from the dialog] ”It's It is ok. I'm still am watching.”

After that, I had a showered and blow dried my hair . The hair dry rang for more than ten minutes later, I wanted to go on with before going back to my report. writing. When As I was passeding by the living room, I saw my dad has already had fallen asleep. the There the blanket and his coat covered in his body. The place Where my mom had been lain was absent sleepy is now empty. Suddenly, I realized something as I saw my father was sleeping contently with such a so sweet smile on his face. I was smiling also beaming deeply from my heart at that moment time. 

I am happy that I can read saw the subtle love between them.  my parents now. It is not as great as lovers’ Vows, as flowery as the poem True, their love may not be as intense as initial vows of lovers nor as flowery as in a poem but their love is real.  One can see in their simple gestures of trying to keep the other warm. Such tenderness is what dreams are made of. concentrated into several simple actions, just covering your body with my clothes when you are asleep. That is the ordinary love and the truest love, so tender that you can only feel it in your dream.[This is long winded because you are repeating from what we can guess from the context.  Unless it is for hard emphasis or rheotric, It is better to write something different to give more value to your essay]

Good imagery and a very nice story.  Writing such essays in perfect grammar can also sound cold and boring.  I'm showing you how to write more emotively.  My Chinese software isn't working today as I am transferring data from the old computer to the new one.]

My Love is in your While You Sleeping

I have been home for about one month. Staying with my parents was [This implies it is no longer true now or that you no longer stay with your parents because they are gone etc.  So you don't use past tense unless these conditions are true and you have somehow conveyed the idea to the reader, otherwise they assume that it is true.] is always happy and sweet. We missed each other very much. We have already had cleaned our house before the Spring Festival. and consequently, we had have nothing to do today.

Anyway, it was a good idea to have a some rest for one the [using "one" means that you are always cleaning the place (in a negative sense) ]day. And Also I planned to finish the report of the my internship in from last term. so Hence I was in the study and busy with my writing. My parents were lying on the sofa while as they watched TV. When I was became a little/bit tired, I went outside my study for a break, and I saw my mother mom [more affectionate.  You are telling a story and not writing a report] was asleep, and covered with in a blanket. What touched me was that my father’s coat was covered upward on top of the blanket. You may not know that, [Of course we don't know, so writing like this does not add value to your essay. Write something like what I did to make your essay sound more affectionate]Let me clarify about my family.  My parents are a bickering lot.  Nothing serious but tiny little spats here and there. fighters, they bicker (not too serious)with each other just because of some tiny things. Well, they are like two little children in my mind! sometimes. It seemed like that my Father seemed like he needed some shut eye and so was going to sleep, [What you wrote is not wrong but sounds too formal.  Here you are trying to relate a story in real-time as if you are talking to us directly.  This makes an essay or story effective.  You need to connect with your audience] I said, to him: