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anyone can help???? The graphic information presented in these charts reflects the steel prices in the more than 20 years and the quantities of the steel products in five certain countries-China, Japan, the U.S., Russia and the Germany. As can be seen from the first line chart, the steel prices rised from $250 per ton to approximately $435 per ton during the period from 1980 to 1987, which was followed by a sharp decrease to $350 per ton in 1988.The prices reached the peak at almost $500per ton in 1990. After, the number falled again, reaching the low point of around $275 per ton in 1993. The period from 1993 to 2000 saw fluctuations between $250 and $350 per ton, but finally the prices of steel declined again, bottoming out at just over $200 per ton in 2004. As for the accompanying bar chart, it is clear that the China made the most steel products (218 milion ton) while the Germany produced the least(just 47 million ton). Japan and the U.S. produced 124 and 116million ton respectively, which were almost half of the production of China. Additionally, Russia had the second least production of steel products in those five countries. Overall, it can be clearly seen from the graph that in the 1980s the steel prices were relative higher than the followed over ten years and as for the steel productions, the East Asian countries surpassed the other three countries.

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does these figures are real, it means that with time, steel prices are declining.
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anyone can help????

The graphic information presented in these charts reflects the steel prices in the during more than 20 years and the quantities of the steel products in five certain countries-China, Japan, the U.S., Russia and the Germany.

As can be seen from the first line chart, the steel prices rised rose from $250 per ton to approximately $435 per ton during the period from 1980 to 1987, which was followed by a sharp decrease to $350 per ton in 1988. The prices reached the a peak at almost $500 per ton in 1990. After Later, the number falled fell again, reaching the low point of around $275 per ton in 1993. The period from 1993 to 2000 saw fluctuations between $250 and $350 per ton, but finally the prices of steel declined again, bottoming out at just over $200 per ton in 2004.

As for the accompanying bar chart, it is clear that the China made the most steel products (218 milion million tons) while the Germany produced the least (just 47 million tons). Japan and the U.S. produced 124 and 116 million tons respectively, which were was almost half of the production of China. Additionally, Russia had the second least smallest production of steel products in those five countries.

Overall, it can be clearly seen from the graph that in the 1980s the steel prices were relative higher than in the followed following over ten years. and as for the Steel productions, in the East Asian countries surpassed the production of the other three countries.

 

("the following over ten years" is awkward.  You should use the correct number of years:  "the following 13 years".)

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