Please, make a correction for my exercise in compositions.
How are you doing?
Welcome to Jinju city Mr. and Mrs. Vandersen.
How was your drive?
The traffic was heavy, so I can’t blame you for being late.
Anyway, we have a dinner reservation at 5.30. After meal, we will go to the hotel to park these cars.
Last night, opening ceremony was held.
At 8pm. the fireworks display started and it was spectacular.
All the lanterns were on at the same time.
New airplane
How are you getting along with your work, especially new airplanes?
For me, I think teaching someone is interesting and is worthwhile.
However, after I restart to study English again, I feel run out of time or I need more efficient time management skill.
IELTS Test
In the reading and listening test, I am little bit confident, however, in the writing and speaking test I think I need more practice. As you probably know, this time, I just gave it a try to see my English level straight and plan how to study. In conclusion, I should exercise more writing and speaking. Therefore, from several days ago, I begin attending an English class. And for writing test, I bought a useful book which collects letters and essays.
Yuedong Festival
More than almost 200 lanterns standing for Korean tradition and other country like the US, China, Japan and so on. It looks beautiful and fancy.
Jinju Castle
During a war between Japan and Korea, Jinju Castle was one of the impregnable fortresses, eventually the castle fell to the enemy. A famous ginseng, Korean geisha, called Nonage sacrifice herself. She put 10 rings on 10 fingers in previous before she held Japanese leader in her arms and dove into the river.
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Please, make a correction for my exercise in compositions.
How are you doing?Welcome to Jinju city Mr. and Mrs. Vandersen.
How was your drive?
The traffic was heavy, so I won't blame you for being late.
Anyway, we have a dinner reservation at 5.30. After the meal, we will go to the hotel to park cars.
Last night, the opening ceremony was held.
At 8pm. the fireworks display started and it was spectacular.
All the lanterns were on at the same time.
New airplane
How are you getting along with your work, especially new airplanes?
For me, I think teaching someone is interesting and worthwhile.
However, after I restart to study English , I feel i am running out of time or I need more efficient time management skills.
IELTS Test
In the reading and listeningsection, I am a little bit confident, however, in the writing and speakingsection. I think I need more practice. As you probably know, this time, I just gave it a try to see my English level straight and plan how to study. In conclusion, I should exercise more in writing and speaking. Therefore, since several days ago, I have begun attending an English class. And for writing test, I have bought a useful book which collects letters and essays.
Yuedong Festival
Almost more than 200 lanterns are standing for Korean tradition and other countries like the US, China, Japan and so on. It looks beautiful and fancy.
Jinju Castle
During a war between Japan and Korea, Jinju Castle was one of the impregnable fortresses, eventually the castle fell to the enemy. A famous ginseng, Korean geisha, called Nonage, sacrificed herself. She put 10 rings on 10 fingers in advance before she held Japanese leader in her arms and dove into the river.
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Please, make a correction for my exercise in compositions.
The traffic was heavy, so I don't blame you for being late.
After the meal, we will go to the hotel and park there.
Last night, the opening ceremony was held.
How are you doing at work, especially the new airplanes? < is he a pilot?
However after I
In the reading and listening test, I somewhat confident, ~~~ the rest is correct.
As you probably know, this time, I just gave it a try to see my English level straight and plan how to study. < 미안해요... 이것이 문장은 이해할 수 없어요.
In conclusion, I should practice more writing and speaking. Several days ago, I began attending an English class. To study for the writing test, I bought a useful book which is a collection of letters and essays.
More than almost 200 lanterns represent the traditions of Korea and other countries like the US, China, Japan and so on.
During the war between Japan and Korea, Jinju Castle was one of the most impregnable fortresses, which eventually
잘했어요! 만약 어떤 질문이 있으면, 내개 그냥 물어봐주세요. (영어로)
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