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Second: May 31, 2010 ㅠ ㅠ (crying) It's too dificult to explain the situation but I'll do my best !!!! Can you see my photo? This is map of Seoul subway stations. It consists of 14 lines so it's very complicated, especially for aged people. It would be a maze if you were at transfer station. There was a old lady who didn't know which way to go. A station was her destination. I was aware that A is on the line No. 2. I guided her because it was on my way. Then we reached a fork. There were two stairs. --(stairs)------ (The third basement) │ │ >>>>(train "C")>>>>>>>>(The third basement) me & old lady ( the second basement ) -----│ │ │ <<<<<(train "D")<<<<<<< (The third basement) │ ---(stairs)------ (The third basement) If you choose one of two and walk down the stairs, you'll get on the train bound for C. Otherwise, you'll get on the train bound for D. I didn't know where A is bound for. If you know terminal's ( the last station ) name of which you want to go, you'll choose the direction easily. Because only terminal and major stations are written in the sign. I thought she was aware of terminal's name and I asked "Is it bound for C ?" then she said "Maybe that's right." So I told her confidently "You can get there by going this way". Later on, I found out that was wrong the direction. It was my mistake! I told her the way in D's direction! I concerned about her because she has to go up and down the stairs. In addition, She was a elder! I couldn't find her even though I tried. But then later I took the subway and accidently saw the map of subway system. I found out that A is on the way bound for D !! Wow!! That finally made me feel at ease. That was a joint effort by mistakes of her and mine. _______________________________________________________________________ I wish my correction could convey the meaning more clearly. It took for about 4 hours to finish. It made me mad. ㅠ ㅠ However I really appreciate your attention. Your corretions encourage me to cheer up!

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                                       --(stairs)------ (The 3th basement) 
                                     │ 
                                     │ >>>>(train "C")>>>>>>>>(The 3th basement)
me & old lady  ------- │ 
(the 2th basement)  │ 
                                     │ <<<<<(train "D")<<<<<<< (The 3th basement) 
                                     │ 
                                      ---(stairs)------ (The 3th basement)

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