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A dream of the ability of speaking and writing English In order to speak English fluently, I shall write more and speak more. Bye the way, I used to read news on the yahoo, bbc , the economist and some other English novels, such as “the world is flat ” written by Thomas L Friedman, and I love and this book very much and recommend it , which was a best seller. At the same time, I used to listen the radio and videos ,whose language is English. But now ,I finally realize that I have been ignoring two other important things: speaking and writing. Getting started is always the hardest part ,but the race is where the fun begins. I hold a belief all the time that I can make it . However if you don’t do me a favor, it will become much harder for me . even it is impossible to realize my goal. Especially thanks to Connie, I have learnt so much from the corrected diary entries. You may wonder that why I have got the ability of listening and reading firstly, and then begin to learn speaking and writing. Please expect my next essay, and you will get the answer!

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A dream of the ability of speaking and writing English 
(The original title is grammatically correct.  Here is an alternative suggestion) 
The Dream of Mastering Spoken and Written English
 

In order to speak English fluently, I shall write more and speak more. Bye By the way, I used to readthe news on websites such as the Yahoo, BBC, and the Economist, along with some other English novels, such as The World Is Flat, written by Thomas L. Friedman. I love this best-selling book very much and highlyrecommend it. At the same time, I used to listen to the radio and watch videos which were in English. whose language is English. But now, I finally realize that I have been ignoring two other important things skills: speaking and writing. 
Getting started is always the hardest part, but the race is where the fun begins. I hold a belief wholeheartedly believe all the time that I can make it. However if I'm unable to find those who can help me, you don’t do me a favor, it will become much harder for me. even it is and perhaps impossible for me to realize my goal. Especially Thanks to Connie, I have learned so much from the corrected diary entries. You may wonder that how I became competent in listening and reading English before speaking and writing. Please expect my next essay, and you will get the answer! 

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A dream of the ability of speaking and writing English

In order to speak English fluently, I shall write more and speak more. Bye the way, I used to read news on the yahoo, bbc , the economist and some other English novels, such as “the world is flat ” written by Thomas L Friedman, and I love and this book very much and recommend it , which was a best seller. At the same time, I used to listen the radio and videos ,whose of which language is English. But now ,I finally  just realize that I have been ignoring two other important things: speaking and writing.
Getting started is always the hardest part ,but the race is where the fun begins.(这句前面能理解,后面就不知道说的什么了, 请解释一下)  I hold a belief all the time that I can make do it . However, if you don’t do me a favor, it will become much harder for me . even it is impossible to realize my goal. Especially thanks to Connie, I have learnt so much from the corrected diary entries.
You may wonder that why I have got the ability of listening and reading firstly, and then begin to learn speaking and writing. Please expect my next essay, and you will get the answer!

能说和写才是在使用英语, 但这两项也是最难的, 朋友大家一起努力吧.
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You are welcome .I am gald that you like it .It's worth of reading it . If you can't search that book from the library,I am willing to send the electronic version of the book to you. Thanks again for editting my essay.and thanks for adding me as your friends on MSN.. I really hope to hlep your mandarin in return.
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Thanks for the recommendation! I'll probably pick up that book from the library once my finals are over.

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