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Story
I don't know what to write today at all therefore, I will simply try to translate a short story into English.
The A person was born. The guardian angel took it by hand and led on life. So they went-went together and came nearer to the end. The person decided to look at the way, looked back and saw two chains of traces. However, in some places where it was the most necessary to the person especially hardly, he saw only one trace s. "How so? - he asked the Keeper. - Why during the most difficult periods of my life you weren't with me? " "The silly, silly person, - answered the Angel. - How you didn't understand? In the most hard times I bore you on my hands".
Note: I have changed the word order in the first sentence so it sounds better.
In green I also added words into the sentence.
When you write words: 'therefore' and 'however' you put a comma after them.
Very good translation :-)
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