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please correct my writing Hi...my name is nurul..since I'm young,I have dream to be an engineer..after i finish my study in elementary school,I further my study in diploma and degree...my diploma study major in science physic and degree major in chemical engineering...I have finished my study about 2 years...and now I still looking for a job..it difficult to find a job now because have many competitor...In my family,I only have a older brother...I'm the youngest..my brother is 29 years old and I'm 27 years old...I love my mom,dad and my brother...I also have a cat and kitten...I very like cat,that's why I like Hello kitty cartoon..I stick the hello kitty sticker at my laptop,handphone and other stuff that I like...

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please correct my writing

Hi...My name is Nurul.._Since I'm young,_I have dreamt [or you could also say "I have dremed of becoming an engineer."] to be an engineer.. After I finish/graduate from my study in elementary and high school,_I will further/continue my studies and earn my in diploma and degree...my diploma study majoring in science [this becomes redundant, Physics is of of Science] physics. and I also want to have a degree major in chemical engineering...I have finished my studies about 2 years ago...and, now I am still looking for a job._It is difficult to find a job now because I have many competitors...In my family,_I only have an older brother who is 29 years old, follwed by me, the youngest at 27 years old....I'm the youngest..my brother is 29 years old and I'm 27 years old...I love my mom,_dad and my brother...I also have a cat and kitten...I very like cat very much,_that's why I like Hello kitty cartoons._I stick the hello kitty sticker at my laptop,handphone and other stuff that I like...

 

I tried my best to correct the senteces. You have a little bit confused about your degrees and majors. Did you meant to say "I have a degree in Physics with a major in Chemical Engineering" OR "I have a degree in Chemical Engineering with a major in Physics." OR are you still studying these degrees? In any case, when learning English, it is best to start writing formally. This develops proper sentensing structures and grammar. As such, refrain from using "..." at the end of your sentences. Also "i" is alsways capital. keep it up. Good work.      

 

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Hi, my name is Nurul. Since I was young, I have dreamed of being an engineer. After I finished primary and secondary school, I furthered my study with a diploma and a degree. My diploma major was in physics and my degree major was in chemical engineering. I finished my studies about 2 years ago, and now I am still looking for a job. It is difficult to find a job now because there are many competitors. In my family, I only have an older brother. I'm the youngest. My brother is 29 years old and I'm 27 years old. I love my mom, my dad, and my brother. I also have a cat and a kitten. I like the cat a lot. That's why I like the Hello Kitty cartoon. I stuck the Hello Kitty sticker on my laptop, cell phone, and other stuff that I like.

 

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