I love music!

I love music!
I　I'm always listing listening to music as I always carry around a and carry around  music player.

recently I knew the special Blitish singer gloup I've recently discovered a new British group called One Direction
The gloup  is called onedirection. 
They are They're called 1D from a by fan fans.

When I came to be able to speak English well, When I become fluent in the English language, I'd like to live in the UK.
I want to go for their live. 

What kind type of song songs do all of you like?
If there are a you all have any recommended singer and song singers and or songs, please tell me. please let me know!
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I love music!

I love music!
I'm always listening to music and always carry a music player(ipod, cd player, mobile phone?).

Recently I heard the this special British singer group/boyband.
The group is called One Direction.
They are called 1D from a by fans.

When I came to be able to am able to speak English well,
I want to go for their live live there/in the UK. -(THEIR- is a possesion of someones)
                                                                 (THERE- is a place/destination)
What kind of songs do all of you like?
If there are any recommended singers and/or songs, please tell me/let me know.
I

With out the corrections:

I love music! 
I'm always listening to music and always carry my ipod.(I chose and ipod just to show, you can use different items)

Recently I heard this British boyband. 
The group is called One Direction. 
They are called 1D by fans. 

When I am able to speak English well, 
I want live there/in the UK. 

What kind of songs do all of you like? 
If there are any recommended singers and/or songs, please let me know.