I wanted to be a great cooker.
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My mother was sick so I was cook because I think it was easy.
First I cut Kimchi and ham a little and I fried them with oil on frying fan for a while.
It will be finished after I fried it with a little rice and I put it on with some salt a dish.
It looked like good but I was disappointed after I ate it.
It was not delicious I thought.
In fact it tasted salt and hot.
My sister doesn’t like it but my father ate it all because his daughter first cooked.
I really wanted to be a great cooker, but unfortunately I am not.
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My mother was sick so I cooked because I thought it was easy.
First I sliced Kimchi and a ham and I fried them with oil on frying pan for a while.
It finishes after I fried it with some rice and add a little bit salt.
It looked good but I was disappointed after I ate it.
It was not delicious as I thought.
In fact it tasted salty and hot.
My sister didnt like it but my father ate it all because his daughter cooked for the first time.
I really want to be a great cook, but unfortunately I am not.
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Sorry to hear your mother isn't feel very well. May God bless your mother to recover very soon. Wish you and your other families all the best and health in the coming new year. :) Even your first meal wasn't tasted so good, but your mother surely can get your heart. :) But please remember, do not ever want to be a good cooker again, ok? You need to be a good cook! :) 새해 복 많이 받으세요! :)
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