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Merry christmas to all the foreign friends with the time is going,today is 24dcember that is also christmas eve.today many western friends will go shoping on the supermarkt and many shoping centry. they will eat apple that meaning safe and everythings is well.they will buy many gifts for the friends and childs.they will dress up christmas trees . many apples and gifts wil dangle the tree.the old christmas man will send the gift when many people asleep.many kids will acheieve a suprise at the second morning. in here i whish all the foreign friends merry christmas and all the thing is best

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Merry christmas to all my foreign friends

with the time is going, Today is the 24th of December which is also christmas eve. Today many western friends will go shopping in the supermarkets and shopping centres. They will eat apple that means everything is safe and well. They will buy many gifts for their friends and children. They will dress up christmas trees. Apples and gifts wil dangle from the tree. Father Christmas will bring gifts when people fall asleep. Kids will get a surprise in the morning. I whish all my foreign friends merry christmas and all the thing is best 

 

Merry Christmas to you too! I guess you haven't learnt English for long? So you make quite a lot of mistakes!! But, the good thing is I can understand it, so they are mostly small mistakes :)


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