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Please correct it　thank you I am happy when it seeing poetry. and what word do you add after this sentence? "1st is a miracle that meet you. 2nd is friendship that birth here and there. 3rd is you that should be there." thank you

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No problem, it's my pleasure. 韻を踏むと勉強になりました。 最初は意味がちゃんと分からなかったと思います。 もしかして"what word do you add after this sentence?"の代わりに"what line would you add to the following poem?"と言いたかったでしょうか。"this sentence"というと前者の文書か下記の文章かはっきり分かりません。 Please pay special attention to the plural form of words in English, such as word → words, and this sentence → these sentences. The poem is good, and you can definitely use it.
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MR.David.E Thank you for your correct Do you know Japanese ”韻を踏む”(IN WO FUMU) English "rhyme" "that" is my rhyme Cannot I use that? please teach me Jenny thank you for your comment I like it . may i use it?
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Please correct it　thank you

I am happy when it seeing looking at poetry.
and what word do you add after this sentence?  (I can't think of a word to add)


"1st is a miracle that to meet you.
2nd is friendship that birth is born here and there.
3rd is you that should be there."

thank you

You are quite a poet.  It's very good.

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Finally,i see you in front of my eyes.
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my English is poor.so.. but i undertand your meaning.

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