Bad weather

Jinan has had bad weather lately, a succession of dull days which dampen my spirit and I also have a cold, headache, and insomnia. I found I have lost weight yesterday, which is what I've been trying to do, but the feeling was not that good. Now it is raining and snowing and I do not know how I will go to my classes tomorrow. Now I'm going to change my shoes and eat dinner.

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Bad Weather

Jinan has had bad weather lately,. A succession of dull damp days downs the spirits. and I also have been a cold, a headache, and insomnia. I found I lost my weight yesterday, and this is what I've been I was looking forward to, but the I feeling was not feeling that good. Now sky it is rainning and snowing and I do not know how should I go to if I will go to my classes tomorrow. Now I'm going to change put on my shoes and go out to eat dinner.

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Lately, the weather in Jinan has been bad.  For days the weather has been damp and cold.  I have had headaches and insomnia.  Though, yesterday I found out that I lost weight.  I should have been happy about losing weight, but I was not feeling very well.  Now it is raining and snowing and I am unsure whether I will want to go to class tomorrow.  Well, I am goint to go put on my shoes and go out to eat dinner.

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bad weather

Jinan has had bad weather lately, a succession of dull days that damps down the spirits. and I also have been had a cold, a headache, and insomnia. I found I lost my weight yesterday, this is what I've been looking forward to, but the feeling was not that good. Now sky it is rainning and snowing and I do not know how should I I can go to my classes tomorrow. Now I'm going to change my shoes to eat dinner.

Great work ... sorry the weather has been bringing you down. I hope you get some sleep and feel better soon!