Falling to Pieces

A shot in the dark
A past, lost in space
Where do I start?
The past, and the chase
You hunted me down
Like a wolf, a predator
I felt like a deer caught in the light love lights

You loved me and I was frozen in time
Hungry Hunger for that this flesh of mine
But I can't compete with a that she-wolf who has brought me to my knees
What do you see in those yellow eyes?
Cause As I'm falling to pieces

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