The weather
What to say in a notebook entry? I'm a newbie in writing in internet and it's somehow strange for me to say something here. Let me take a typical conversation that you'll probably use when you have nothing to say in an elevator.
Today has been a cloudy day in the city, not so cold but with that high degree of humidity, the sensation is about 3 degrees less than the temperature shown in the thermometer.
It's being a strange autumm with high temperatures and not so rainy, it's expected that in these days you should put sweaters and thick socks on but two weeks before I just wore a thin sweater without jacket or anithing else...
And that ends my little contribution to enhance my poor english!
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The Weather
What to say in a notebook entry? I'm a newbie in writing on the internet/online and it's somehow/kind of strange for me to write/talk on here. Let me take a typical conversation that you'd probably have when you have nothing to say in an elevator.
Today has been a cloudy day in the city, not so cold but with a high degree of humidity, the sensation/it feels like it/the heat index is about 3 degrees less than the temperature shown on the thermometer.
It's being a strange autumm with high temperatures and not so rainy, it's expected/you'd expect that in these days you should put on sweaters and thick socks but two weeks ago I just wore a thin sweater without a jacket or anything else...
And that ends my little contribution to improve/for improving my poor/bad english!
Excellent. Your English is not poor! blue = more natural sounding options (to me), red = corrections. Great job.
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