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today is ChuSeok:D Today is ChuSeok. 오늘은 추석이다. ChuSeok is the Korean version of Thanksgiving day. 추석은 한국식 Thanksgiving day(추수감사절)이다. And my mom's birthday.^.^ 그리고 엄마의 생일이기도 하다.^.^ So I'll make "brown seaweed soup." 그래서 나는 "미역국"을 만들것이다. This pronunciation of korean "Mi-Yueok-Guk". 이것은 한국어 발음으로 "미역국이다." That is special soup. 이것은 특별한 국이다. That must have in birthday. 이것은 생일때 반듯이 먹어야 한다. Mom~happy birthday!!!!:D 엄마~생일축하해!!!! is that right?

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today is ChuSeok:D

Today is ChuSeok.
오늘은 추석이다.
ChuSeok is the Korean version of Thanksgiving day.
추석은 한국식 Thanksgiving day(추수감사절)이다.
And my mom's birthday.^.^
그리고 엄마의 생일이기도 하다.^.^
So I'll make "brown seaweed soup."
그래서 나는 "미역국"을 만들것이다.
This pronunciation in Korean "Mi-Yueok-Guk".
이것은 한국어 발음으로 "미역국이다."
It is a special soup.
이것은 특별한 국이다. 
That you must have on your Birthday. 
이것은 생일때 반듯이 먹어야 한다.
Mom~happy birthday!!!!:D
엄마~생일축하해!!!!



자은언니 영어 잘하넹~ Tell your mom I said "생일축하합니다" 알았지?
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Use one "!" .... Do not use Korean ^^ in the English writing. ....It is correct in Korean, but for the English < do not use / has no meaning. Yes, I do this too ㅋㅋ < see? Starting any sentence with "And" is debatable (people don't agree about doing that / some say don't). Study capitalization and prepositions. Great job!
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Today is ChuSeok

오늘은 추석이다. Today is ChuSeok.

추석은 한국식 Thanksgiving day(추수감사절)이다.
ChuSeok is the Korean version of Thanksgiving. day.

그리고 엄마의 생일이기도 하다.^.^ And It's also my Mom's birthday.^.^
그래서 나는 "미역국"을 만들것이다. 
            So I'll make "Brown Seaweed Soup."  < name of things (titles) are capitalized.

이것은 한국어 발음으로 "미역국이다." The Korean pronunciation is, "Mi-Yueok-Gheuk".

이것은 특별한 국이다. This is a special soup. 
                                       

이것은 생일때 반듯이 먹어야 한다.  This soup is eaten on birthdays.
이것이 생일때 국물이 먹어야 한다.


엄마~생일축하해!!!! Mom~Happy birthday!
(more common) > Happy Birthday Mom!



Is that right?  <  잘했어요!  수고했어요!  계쇽하세요! 
Is that correct? < 또 좋아.
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it's a bit late though..but want to wish you happy chuseok!!
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thank you~*^^*

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