My first writing down. A little bit about myself.

Hello. It is a great I found this ITALKI. I wrote in the text my introducing myself that I need to know English because I love to travel. I need more English practice English but I am very busy. I can't take English courses I haven't time enough don't have enough time.
I work in a big company. I am a manager. My job is interesting. My workers/employees are very responsible and hardworking. My collective work environment is friendly.
How have I learnt English before yesterday since now? I have reeded read English books and listed I have listened to audio in my car to the during in a way to the job work. I have learned in English courses studied some courses in English at a language school named "SpeakUp" a year ago but they have inconvenient schedule in this year.
I need much a lot of practice with in speaking lessons. It is very difficult for me/I find it very difficult to perceive aurally follow English speech for me. What yet else? It is difficult for me to use tenses for me.
I hope that I will improve my English with your help and with ITALKI. It That is all for today.
P.S.: I wrote this entry in 35 minutes this record.

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My first written remarks. A little bit about myself.

Hello! It is great that I have found ITALKI. In my introduction, I wrote that I need to know English because I love to travel. I need to practice my English more but I am very busy. I can't take English courses because I don't have enough time.

I work as a manager in a big company. My job is interesting, the people I supervise are very responsible and hardworking. It is a friendly division.

How have I been trying to learn learn English so far? I have read English books and listened to audio (((could say 'tapes' or 'CDs'))) in my car while on the way to work. Last year, I studied English at the language school "SpeakUp", but the schedule is inconvenient for me this year.

I need a lot of speaking practice, as it is very difficult for me to follow spoken English. What else? I also think verb tenses are difficult.

I hope that I can improve my English through speaking with you and with ITALKI. That's all for today.

P.S.: It took me 35 minutes to write this.