I like France French cultures, [there is only one culture for a group of people but there may be differences] because I was study Art, [You really need to learn how to leave spacing after punctuation marks.]accepted some of the Western Art Education，I appreciate their own cultural heritage of protection measures，but for my home country's tragedy,I still have regret.I think no any Chinese when he see12 Zodiac's heads by cut down and now in other countries to be auctioned fell nothing.So I really hope this historical relic of the holder and the auction companies to take care of some of the Chinese people’s felling,and Increase some of communication，[In general, no comma before conjunctions unless for clarification of sentence meaning and dramatic pauses]because I think Yuan Ming Yuan's tragedy，not just for the Chinese, it is a big lost loss [lost, lose are verbs.  Loss is noun]of culture for all mankind.

I like the French culture because I am studying art and has some Western art knowledge.  I appreciate their cultural heritage and their protection of it.  However, for my country's tragedy, I could but not feel shame and humilation.  I am sure most Chinese will cringe at seeing the twelve headless figures 2 of the Chinese Zodiac signs and to add insult to injury to see the heads being auctioned off.  I wish that these enterprises and these so call purveyors of antiques will show some consideration of the feelings of the Chinese people.

The burning and vandalism of the Garden is not only the loss to the Chinese nation but to the cultural heritage of mankind.

If you have any question on the correction, feel free to ask.  There is no shame in asking. "A fool you are for five minutes before you asked.  An eternal one, if you never do."

1.  A "relic" is

    1.   a:   "an object esteemed and venerated because of association with a saint or

                 martyr"

         b: souvenir, memento

When I first read your essay, I do not know where I should start correcting it.  Although it can be understood from the context, if I were to correct it, it would be totally different.  It would no longer be your composition.  Tenses are wrong, use of wrong words and even basic grammar structures are non-existent.  You have problem even with the basic verbs like, "are" vs "have" etc.  I don't want to demean you.  However, on the grace saving side, your spelling is perfect!  So if you want me to correct your essay, just let me know.

當我讀到你的文章的時候, 我不知從哪兒開始修改. 雖然明白你在寫什么, 如果我更改了以後, 文章不是你的作品了. 你用的時態動詞完全不正確, 甚至連基本的語法結構都用錯了. 你不了解怎样用 "are" 或 "have". 我是說實話而不是故意低毁你. 雖然如此, 你的拼寫無缺, 一字不錯.如果你真得有心去學英文的話, 哪告訴我一下.... 我的中文寫得不好, 要多多指教與修改.

A Chinese historical relic will auction in French Paris ， again...!

For some interesting about Chinese culture 's friend ,have you heard a big Royal garden at north west of Beijing ,his name is Yuan Ming Yuan ,there has over 100 attractions (contain Eastern and western architecture style). The equivalent of nine forbidden city and 600 football ground is so big，countless treasures, there by burn down by England and France army at 1860,the big fire burned for three days,and entire city of Beijing people can smell the smoke.40 Chinese style buildings completely destroy basicly,because it is full of wooden architecture，the surviving western architecture ，destory by the civil war, theft, and the Cultural Revolution，now it's basicly like a real ruins，a Chinese pain forever.
last week .I heard a news ,one of the Yuan Ming Yuan's historical relic will auction in French Paris,a few month later another one in London.so ,it's very shame and painful for most Chinese.I like France cultures,because I was study Art,accepted some of the Western Art Education，I appreciate their own cultural heritage of protection measures，but for my home country's tragedy,I still have regret.I think no any Chinese when he see12 zodiac's heads by cut down and now in other countries to be auctioned fell nothing.so I really hope this historical relic of the holder and the auction companies to take care of some of the Chinese people’s felling,and Increase some of communication，because I think Yuan Ming Yuan's tragedy，not just for the Chinese, it is a big lost of culture for all mankind.

A Auction of Imperial Chinese Artifact 1 of Historical Value relic will auction Again in Franch Paris, France! ， again...!

For some interesting about Chinese culture 's friend ,have you heard a big Royal [you don't use this for Chinese royalty.  The word is imperial because China was an empire, not a kingdom like England.] garden at north west of Beijing ,his name is Yuan Ming Yuan ,there has over 100 attractions [Wrong word choice.  These are not built for tourists or to the public] (contain Eastern and western architecture style).

For those interested in Chinese culture, ever heard of the imperial garden north west of Beijing.  The name is Yuan Ming Yuan - The Garden of Perfect Brightness.  It has over a hundred buildings done in both Chinese and Western architectural style.

The equivalent of nine forbidden city and 600 football ground is so big，countless treasures, there by burn down by England and France army at 1860,the big fireburned for three days,and entire city of Beijing people can smell the smoke.40 Chinese style buildings completely destroy basicly,because it is full of wooden architecture，the surviving western architecture ，destory destroy [I grant you that this is just a typo.  Your spelling is by far the best than most of your compatriots.] by the Civil War [I am assuming that you are talking about the war between the two Chinese parties after the Japanese surrender], theft, and the Cultural Revolution，now it's basically like a real ruins，a Chinese pain forever. [This is basically wrong sentence structure in English.  It is Chinglish.  Also you need to put spacing after punctuation and don't use roman numerals in a formal essay.  Spell it out in full unless it is a huge number.]

It is so huge that nine Forbidden City can be contained in it; or about six hundred football fields.  Its countless treasures were looted by the Franco-Anglo troops when it was burnt down in 1860.  The inferno/conflagration was so great that it burnt for three days and the entire city of Beijing could smell the smoke.  Forty Chinese style buildings were completely destroyed as they were entirely made of wood.  Finally the stone surviving western style palaces fell into further decay due to theft, the Civil War and the Cultural Revolution.  It is now basically a ruin - a Chinese National Humilation.

last week .I heard a news ,one of the Yuan Ming Yuan's historical relic will auction in French Paris,a few month later another one in London.so ,it's very shame and painful for most Chinese.

Last week, I heard from the news that an artifact from the imperial garden is being auctioned off in Paris and then to be followed by another in London.  It reminded most Chinese of their national shame.