Winter has just begun in Moscow

It's has been snowing for 3 days in Moscow. It's started after about one and a half of months a month and a half without any rainfall(?) precipitations. But now there is are a lot of snow everywhere: on the ground, roads, trees, buildings. All of the parked cars are covered by a thick layer of snow. The temperature is not very low - it's about -3 celcius degrees and there is no wind so the weather is very pleasant.

There was very really heavy trafic all the day. There are a lot of trafic jams in Moscow even on dry roads, but when the roads are not in an acceptable condition (but when there are bad conditions on the roads) - all the entire city stucks in the on becomes one big trafic jam. I went to/travelled to my English lesson by car today but fortunately I drove to the city at 7 p.m. against the traffic flow as most of people which was were returning from their work to home home from work and when I went back returned to my home/home in town in at10 p.m. most of the people were already was in their homes. So it haven't taken too much time for me I did not have to spend too much time on in the road.

I like snow and winter very much a lot because I'm a snowboarder. My friends and I are going to the ski resort tomorrow. which will just It opens at 6 p.m. I'm really looking forward for it.

Enjoy your boarding Dmitry.  There are corrections but this did not cause any problem at all in understanding what you had written.  Keep going!

Winter has just begun in Moscow

It has been snowing for 3 days in Moscow. It started after about one and a half of months without any precipitation. Now there is a lot of snow everywhere: on the ground, roads, trees, buildings. All parked cars are covered by a thick layer of snow. The temperature is not very low - it's about -3 celcius degrees and there is no wind so the weather is very pleasant.

There was very heavy traffic all day. There are a lot of traffic jams in Moscow even on dry roads. When the road is not in an acceptable condition, all of the cars get stuck in a big traffic jam. I went to my English lesson by car today but fortunately I drove to the city at 7 p.m. in the opposite direction to most of people, who were returning from their work to home. When I went back to my home in town at 10 p.m. most people were already at their homes so, I didn't spend too much time on the road. 

I like snow and winter very much, because I'm a snowboarder. My friends and I are going to the ski resort tomorrow, which will open at 6 p.m. I'm really looking forward for it.

Winter has just begun in Moscow

It's been snowing for 3 days in Moscow after about one and a half of months without any precipitations. But now there's are a lots of snow everywhere: on the ground, roads, trees, buildings. All parked cars are covered with a thick layer of snow. The temperature is not very low - it's about -3 degrees Celcius and there is no wind, so the weather is very pleasant.

There has been very heavy trafic all the day. There are a lot of trafic jams in Moscow even on dry roads, but when the roads are not in acceptable condition - the whole city becomes one big traffic jam. I went to my English lesson by car today but fortunately I drove to the city at 7 p.m. while most of people were returning from their work to home and when I went back to my home at 10 p.m. most of the people were already was in their home. So I didn't have to spend too much time on the road.

I like snow and winter very much because I'm a snowboarder. My friends and I going to the ski resort tomorrow, which doesn't open until 6 p.m. I'm really looking forward to it.

Dmitry, your English is very good. You express yourself very well and just need a few corrections here and there. If you're ever interested in live conversation with a native, let me know. My Skype name is ulymarrero. Good luck!