A boat
there is a small boat ，from southest flow to northwest ， and from northwest flow to southest .
bear the weight of how much longing, bear the weight of how much illusions,come and go without durance .
time rolls on light and darkness takes turns.
Beautiful boat had been not in the past no longer with great splendor and glitter.
passed the storm and crossed the dangerous shoal . Longings had been become vague ，dreams had been broken .
where are make me anchored side shore.where is my sheltered harbor.
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When we chatted yesterday, you said you do not write poetry.
This notebook entry is poetry, Kary.
Did these words come from your own mind, or is this a translation of a Chinese poem?
The English sentence structure needs work, but it would take some time. I can help you revise it, if you wish. Still, the message of the wording comes through to me.
(Do you know the word "durance" is no longer used in modern English? It is called an "archaic" word, seen only in old books and poems. I never saw it before and I had to look it up.)
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