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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I'm a chinese girl. My name is kary. Because I want to make many friends with a lot of people, so I learn English .
I’m a cheerful girl who loves laughing. My greatest avocation is musIng (I think "meditation" would be better here)
I can stay by myself alone for a long time without feeling disconsolate in the least .
1. As for punctuation marks, there must be one space after a comma and two spaces after a period.
2. "because" and "so", "although/though" and "but" (these conjuctions)cannot be used simultaneously in one sentence, which is totally different from expression in Chinese.
3. Thanks and I have learned a new word "disconsolate" in your writing:))
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