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The my yesterday. Yesterday, I went to the park near my house. In the park, I sow a lot of beautiful yellow and red lreafs. Thire falled from the tree, and laythick everywhere. I like a wolk, because when I walking,I can find the cycle of the seasons, colored leaves, flowers, the snow, sprouts, sunset, the wind, and so on. How spending in the park my favorite, is that read a letter from a pen pal in Japan with a cup of hot coffee. This pictere is Narrowleaf firethorn, it is called in Japan "Tachibana-modoki". I taked this photo by my cellphone in the park.

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The my yesterday.

Yesterday, I went to the park near my house.
In the park, I saw a lot of beautiful yellow and red leaves lreafs. They ire falled fell  from the trees  and lay thick everywhere. (Note: the different coloured leaves can be referred to as autumn colours. )


I like a to walk, because when I am walking, I can find the cycle of the seasons, coloured leaves, flowers, the snow, sprouts, sunset, the wind, and so on.


How spending in the park my favorite, is that read a letter from a pen pal in Japan with a cup of hot coffee. My favourite time in the park is spent reading a letter from a Japanese penpal while drinking a cup of hot coffee.

This picture is of Narrowleaf Firethorn, it is called in Japan "Tachibana-modoki".
I taked took this photo by with my cellphone in the park.

 

Notes: As your later comment said, a number of spelling mistakes. Some of my corrections reflect UK spelling, US spelling may be different.

 

Verbs like taked, falled that I have corrected are examples of overregularization errors. That is you applied a rule that said add -ed to a verb to make it past tense. However English has a lot of irregular verbs that don't follow those rules. It is at once both an annoyance and the reason why  spoken English is so flexible. You don't have to be a good speaker to communicate, we can understand partial spoken patterns.

 

I liked the photograph, cellphone cameras can be very useful.

 

 

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The My yesterday.

Yesterday, I went to the park near my house.
In the park, I sow saw a lot of beautiful yellow and red lreafs leaves. Thire They falled fell from the tree trees, and laythick everywhere.


I like a to wolk walk, because when I am walking,I can find the cycle of the seasons, colored leaves, flowers, the snow, sprouts, sunset, the wind, and so on.


How spending in the park my favorite, is that read a letter from a pen pal in Japan with a cup of hot coffee.

My favourite time in the park is to read a letter from a Japan pen pal while having a cup of coffee

This pictere is of Narrowleaf Firethorn, it is called in Japan "Tachibana-modoki".
I taked took this photo by/from/with my cellphone in the park.

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Beautiful picture
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Ms.Jura, Thank you!
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A lovely photo= a nice click

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