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The my yesterday.
Yesterday, I went to the park near my house.
In the park, I saw a lot of beautiful yellow and red leaves lreafs. They ire falled fell from the trees and lay thick everywhere. (Note: the different coloured leaves can be referred to as autumn colours. )
I like a to walk, because when I am walking, I can find the cycle of the seasons, coloured leaves, flowers, the snow, sprouts, sunset, the wind, and so on.
How spending in the park my favorite, is that read a letter from a pen pal in Japan with a cup of hot coffee. My favourite time in the park is spent reading a letter from a Japanese penpal while drinking a cup of hot coffee.
This picture is of Narrowleaf Firethorn, it is called in Japan "Tachibana-modoki".
I taked took this photo by with my cellphone in the park.
Notes: As your later comment said, a number of spelling mistakes. Some of my corrections reflect UK spelling, US spelling may be different.
Verbs like taked, falled that I have corrected are examples of overregularization errors. That is you applied a rule that said add -ed to a verb to make it past tense. However English has a lot of irregular verbs that don't follow those rules. It is at once both an annoyance and the reason why spoken English is so flexible. You don't have to be a good speaker to communicate, we can understand partial spoken patterns.
I liked the photograph, cellphone cameras can be very useful.
The My yesterday.
Yesterday, I went to the park near my house.
In the park, I sow saw a lot of beautiful yellow and red lreafs leaves. Thire They falled fell from the tree trees, and laythick everywhere.
I like a to wolk walk, because when I am walking,I can find the cycle of the seasons, colored leaves, flowers, the snow, sprouts, sunset, the wind, and so on.
How spending in the park my favorite, is that read a letter from a pen pal in Japan with a cup of hot coffee.
My favourite time in the park is to read a letter from a Japan pen pal while having a cup of coffee
This pictere is of Narrowleaf Firethorn, it is called in Japan "Tachibana-modoki".
I taked took this photo by/from/with my cellphone in the park.
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