To Commemorating My Good Friend

On this Tonight at midnight, I will shall write about to my good friend.

When I first met him, when I will was starting at to my first job.  He was my student.  He likes smiles a lot and loves to talk.  chat,Soon we became good friends. I worked
because my work is in an painting training agency art school, teaching people how to paint. In that time, I'm was very young then ,and I lacked work experience to my work.The My friend was same age with me, We were of the same age and he usually comforts me when I was  feel down and gloomy.  With his help, I was able to overcome my misery and began to feel for  became very happy,and I really like my job. We usually went fishing,and I usually to help him in his courses.  He was very strived to paint every become a good watercolor painter and a sketch artist.  Later, even though he moved another new city for furthering his studies and career, and went to a good academy,go on with his career. we always have still maintain in contact. [or "did not lose contact"] 

Lately,I hear of about his information,he is dead ! Suddenly, one day, out of the blue, I heard that he was no longer with us!  he In order to help save a drowning child, and be drowned in a small river,golly! he himself was drowned in the small river.  Why? O why must would this happen???!!!

I'm very sad when this news be confirmed,later, When all the news had been confirmed, I went to seen his grieving family. Such sadness in our hearts that I find no words to describe. ,we are very grieved.

A farewell to my dearest friend brother! [我明白你的意思但英文沒有這样的意味.若要用兄弟, 要這样表達. "... dearest friend; for you are a brother in my heart"] I hope you could have been happy will find happiness in the kingdom of heaven. [這样說法是說他是个基督教徒.  如果不是就這样寫, "...happiness in your destination".]

Rambo

To commemorate my good friend

Hi

On this At midnight , I will write  about to my good friend, I met him when I will started my first job, he was my student, he likes was smiling and chatting, soon we became good friends.
because my work is in a painting training agency.

In that time, I'm very young, and I lacked experience in my work, a painting training agency. The My friend who is was the same age as with me ,he usually comforts me when I feel down and gloomy, with his help I became become very happy, and I really like my job.  We usually go  went fishing and I usually to  help with his courses, he was very striving to paint every watercolor and sketch.

later,He moved to a new city and went to a good academy to continue with his career go on with his career.  We always have had contact.
Lately, I hear of about his information,he is dead I was informed he had died whilst attempting ! he in order to help a child who was drowining. and be drowned in a small river,golly!why would this happen???!!! I was very sad when this news was later confirmed. I'm very sad when this news be confirmed,later, Why would this happen???!!!

I saw seen his family, we are all very grieving. A farewell to my brother! I hope you are could have been happy in the kingdom of heaven.

Rambo

To Commemorating My Good Friend

Hi

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On this midnight,_I will write about to my good friend.
I met him when I will start to my first job.__He was my student.__He likes smile and chat,_soon we became good friend.
because my work is in a painting training agency. In that time,I'm very young,_and I lacked experience to my work.__The friend was same age with me,_he usually comfort me when I feel down and gloomy.__with his help,I became very happy,_and I really like my job.__We usually went fishing,_and I usually to help his courses,_he was very strive to paint every watercolor and sketch.__later,he moved a new city and went to a good academy,_go on with his career.__We always have contact.
Lately,_I hear of about his information,_he is dead! he in order to help a child and be drowned in a small river,golly!why would this happen???!!!
I'm very sad when this news be confirmed,_later, I seen his family,_we are very grieved.
A farewell to my brother!I hope you could have been happy in the kingdom of heaven.

Rambo