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watch birds Birds are the symbol of different natural culture. Maybe it is the reason why many people consider watching birds as a great hobby. Definitely, after observing the birds, you will wow their extraordinary capabilities that even human being cannot compete against them. For example, the hummingbirds, the tiniest birds in the world, can beat their wings from 18 to 80 times per second that will absolutely amaze you. Likewise, the owl is the symbol of wisdom and learning. To sum up, watching birds could inspire and educate individual.

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Birds are the symbol of different natural culture. Maybe it is the reason why many people consider watching birds as a great hobby. Definitely, after observing the birds, you will wow their extraordinary capabilities that even human being cannot compete against them. For example, the hummingbirds, the tiniest birds in the world, can beat their wings from 18 to 80 times per second that will absolutely amaze you. Likewise, the owl is the symbol of wisdom and learning. To sum up, watching birds could inspire and educate individual.

 

People consider birdwatching a great hobby because birds symbolize the culture of nature-lovers.  After observing birds, you will definitely be impressed by their extraordinary capabilities, with which humans cannot compete.  For example, hummingbirds, the tiniest birds in the world, can, amazingly, beat their wings from 18 to 80 times per second.  The owl, a symbol of wisdom and learning, can _____ . In summary, watching birds can inspire and educate an individual.


(please insert a capability of owls, since your paragraph is now commited to capabilities, and all bird references must be related in this way.  Owls are not truly wise, their brains are comparatively small to make room for their powerful eyes.) .

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Birds are the symbol of different natural culture??? 不懂你要說什么.我是在猜猜. Birds may mean different things to different cultures.  Perhaps, Maybe it is the reason why bird watching is such a popular hobby for many people consider watching birds as a great hobby. Definitely, After observing them birds, you will wow be amazed their extraordinary capabilities that even we humans would wish to have. being cannot compete against them. For example, the hummingbirds, the tiniest birds in the world, can beat their wings from 18 to 80 times per second. An, astounding feat that no human can do on its own. that will absolutely amaze you. Likewise, the owl is the symbol of wisdom and learning. [This has no scientific basis.  It's a perception projected onto it by humans because of its big eyes.  All living creatures are intelligent, otherwise they will become extinct.  Therefore using this example in your essay, though grammatically correct, has no support for what you are trying to convince.] To sum up, watching birds could Bird watching is an inspiration and educate education for all.individual. [You can also write, "Bird watching can be inspiring and an education for all."]

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