will some body correct this for me please..(Difficult Days)

The hardest part of life is to get on with people whom you don't like to be with. I feel that I'm entering such a miserable stage of my life. This period might not last long and I may recall these days with humor in the future. But the thing is, no matter how hard we try, it is really difficult to deal with people who do not have the ability to make good decisions. And the most unfortunate thing is working for them, pretending they are correct, knowing what they are doing is wrong.

Hi Surangi…what you have written is very sophisticated and you did well with it. Some of my changes are stylistic nuances. (Those are in green.) Notes:

may instead of will because you are indicating uncertainty, right? If you are sure you will see the situation with humor in the future you could employ will, but my sense is may serves the meaning better.

good decisions is substituted for decisions for their own to make the meaning clear, although you could say their own decisions, depending on what you mean.

Overall very good work!

Here's another version besides Sielwall's excellent correction.

will Can someone body correct this for me? Thanks. please..(

Difficult Days)

The hardest part of life is to get on along with people whom you don't like to be with.__I feel that I'm I am going through passing a such a miserable stage of my life.__This period/duration may might not last long and I will shall recall these days with humor in the future. But the thing is However, no matter how hard we try, tried it is really difficult to deal with people those who do not have the ability are incapable to make decisions for on their own. And The most unfortunate thing is working under them; pretending that they are correct, knowing when in fact what they are doing is wrong.